Alvin Branson's fish tail knife. part 1.

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Alamosa, Colorado, 1932

It was the third year of what became known as the great depression. Small businesses and large struggled to stay afloat, not all successfully. In the small town of Alamosa, a dusty Ford pickup truck came to a stop in front of the general store. Alvin Branson let his wife out to go into the store to meet with her friends for coffee while he picked up some things at the hardware store. Once out of the truck, she turned back to him and spoke through the open window.

"I'll be a while, why don't you go over and have a beer and I'll catch up with you there, yes?" she said in a strong French accent.

"Okay, I'll meet you at the Water hole." Alvin replied.

They went their separate ways, and Alvin picked up some fence wire and some odds and ends which he dropped in the back of his pickup. Then driving over to the saloon, that the owner had whimsically named "The Water Hole," he parked his truck and pushed through the bat wing doors. Sitting down at the bar next to a weathered cowboy he'd known since childhood, he ordered a beer. A cool brew was placed in front of him, and the two cowboys toasted one another and drank. Alvin pushed his battered Stetson back on his head.

"Hey Joe, let me have one of those hard boiled eggs."

The bartender placed a hard boiled egg on a paper napkin in front of Alvin, and his friend watched his ritual. Alvin always sliced the egg in half length ways, and salted and peppered each half with care before eating. His friend smiled at this familiar behavior.

"Ya know Alvin, most folks just bite into the danged thing. But you're the only one I know that field dresses it every time."

"Well," Alvin replied, "I like to get the salt and pepper even on it. If I'm gonna eat, I want to do it with a little finesse."

But as much as his friend found it amusing how Alvin ate his hard boiled egg, he was always more interested in the knife that Alvin used. It was unlike any he had ever seen in Colorado. The wood handle was round, and at the end of it was fish tail shaped. It didn't appear to have a back spring, and had a blade that swept up at the tip, not unlike a skinning knife. When Alvin had come back from the war in France, he had been carrying it, and Alvin was reluctant to speak of his experience in the trenches. But his friend's curiosity was getting the better of him.

"Alvin, how long have we known each other?"

"Oh, ever since Miss Cruther's one room school house on the edge of town when we were kids." Alvin said.

"Well, having known you that long, I'd kind of admire to know how you came by that strange Frenchy knife, and then come home with the prettiest girl ever seen in these parts. I know you don't like to talk about the war, and I know ya got powerful hurt over there, but I gotta know."

Alvin smiled, took a long drink of his beer, and turned to his old friend.

"I tell ya what, partner. Story tellin' is dry work, so you fill my mug, and I'll tell you all about it."

The bartender scooped up Alvin's empty mug.

'Heck, if Alvin is gonna tell us a war story, I'll buy the beer!"

Alvin took a sip of the fresh brew, as the saloon loafers gathered around.

"Well, we were in the trenches...


France, the trenches, 1918.

The four men were sitting around an upended crate playing cards by the light of a candle stuck in the neck of an empty wine bottle. Two American and two British officers were enjoying a moment of quiet in the night. One young American lieutenant smiled and laid his hand down on the crate.

"Read 'em and weep gentlemen." he said as he spread his hand out on the crate. He found his glass empty, and a massive sergeant that was acting as his batman filled his glass with wine. The sergeant was a huge ex-lumberjack from Minnesota named Larson, but called Moose by the men in his company. At six foot five he had to duck his head in the dugout room in the trench. As they drank and one of the English officers shuffled the cards, a shot sounded outside. Then another, then a burst of heavy small arms sounded.

"Christ, it's a raid!" someone shouted. The all bolted for the curtain that was the doorway to the trench, and Alvin grabbed his Colt 1911 from his holster and racked the slide. Outside someone had fired a flare up over the trench, so everything was bathed in a garish yellow light. Swirling figures fought in the close combat of the raid. A German unit had crawled close enough to attack under cover of darkness. For the next few moments it was fast and close, and the slide of Alvin's .45 locked back. Franticly he clawed for a fresh magazine, and while he was changing it, a German soldier with a fixed bayonet on his rifle lunged out of the swirling action and stabbed Alvin in the chest before he could react. Sudden white hot pain lanced through him, and he collapsed in the mud of the trench. The German soldier put his boot on Alvin's chest trying to pull his bayonet out of Alvin's chest where it was stuck between the ribs, and Alvin screamed in pain, and knew then he was going to die.

Suddenly Moose Larson came running out of the chaos, screaming like a Viking berserker, wielding his sharpened entrenching tool like a battle axe. The German tried to raise an arm to defend himself, but it was like a twig. Moose swung his entrenching tool with all his strength and caught the German soldiers neck, his head lolled sideways almost severed, the blood looking like a black pulsating fountain in the yellow light of the flare.

Moose knelt and cradled Alvin's head in one hand, his entrenching tool in the other, protecting the young officer he'd become fond of.

"Lieutenant? Lieutenant, do you hear me? Don't you go, you hear?" he implored the critically injured young officer.

"Where's the Doc?" Moose yelled, "Somebody get the Doc!"

Alvin felt a creeping darkness coming over him, and it was easy to give in to the dark. All the noise and pain of the fight was too much, and Alvin Branson surrendered to the darkness.
 
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Part 2.
Alvin didn't know how long the darkness would last, but in a strange way, he knew time was passing. Sometimes he would dream of home, while other times he was just floating in a black void. Once, there was some pain, and he heard a voice say, "Hold him down nurse, he'll tear those stitches." then there was pin prick of pain and the darkness came down again. Then one day the darkness lifted.

Red light was shining through his eyelids, and he could hear voices and hear a moaning to one side of him. He tried to open his eyes, but it was hard. They seemed stuck. He put a lot of effort into it, then his left eyelid came open. Then he got his right open. He moved his head a bit to see where he was. It was a long room, with the row of beds along one wall, with windows spaced along the wall. Across from him on the other side of the room, was another row of beds, He was in a military hospital somewhere, and nurses with blood stained aprons were moving back and forth caring for the wounded. Then the most beautiful girl he'd ever seen bent over him. She was young, not more than twenty years old, if that, and long dark hair was tied back, and she looked down at him with brown eyes that met his in a deep searching look.

"Oh, you are awake!" she said in a strong French accent.

Alvin tried to speak,but nothing came out of his mouth. He struggled to speak, but only a dry croak came out.

"Wait" the girl said. She grabbed a pitcher of water that was on a bedside table and poured some into a glass, and held it up to Alvin's lips. He swallowed greedily at the cool liquid silver that flowed down his throat, and then the girl took the glass away.

"No, not too much to start with. A leetle at a time, no?." she said in her thick accent.

"How...long...been...here?" Alvin asked.

A doctor passing by came over and leaned over Alvin, giving him a once over.

"Well young man, you gave us quite a run for the money. You were more dead than alive when you got here, but kept you around. You took some pretty severe damage to your left lung, and it's going to be a while until you are up and around."

The doctor moved over to a moaning young man with his face swathed in bandages, in the bed across the isle and the young nurse gave him some more water. "Eet weel be okay, no? We will take care of you." she said.

Alvin couldn't help but grin at her accent, and her struggle with English. The girl sensed his amusement, and asked what was funny.

"I haven't heard English spoken quite like that before."

"You make much fun at my English." she pouted.

"No, it's fine really. Better than my French." Alvin told her.

In the following days, the girl, Sophie as her name turned out to be, seemed to hover about Alvin's bed. Alvin found out that Sophie was a volunteer at the army hospital, and that she was from the country. Her father and older brother had been killed in the war, and she had been living at a convent of the Sisters of Mercy, who were also helping the wounded. Alvin found himself looking for her during the day, and she in turn seemed to be drawn to the young officer. She took over his rehabilitation, making him walk every day. It started with just getting him up out of bed. Alvin was shocked at how weak he had become, and just walking to the end of the bed drained him. But each day, Sophie made a chalk mark on the floor, and each day she demanded that he walk two steps past the mark from the day before. The effort would leave him sweating and shaking, leaning on the girl's shoulder as she would help him back to bed. Sophie was always close to Alvin to help with whatever she could. Once, Sister Marie was going to scold Sophie for paying too much attention to the American Officer, but the Mother Superior placed a hand on her arm, stopping her.

"Perhaps this is the strange way God sometimes works his way. The girls father and brother have been killed in this accursed war, maybe this is his way of bringing some measure of happiness back to her."

And so the conspiracy among the black clad sisters took place, to allow the volunteer nurse to spend more time with Alvin. Then came the day when Alvin made it to the end of the row of beds and back.

"So, now for your hard work, I have a surprise. Tomorrow we will have a..." she stopped, groping for the word, "Oh, how you say in Eenglish, a lunch in a leetle basket?"

"You mean a picnic" Alvin asked her.

"Oui, yes, a peecneek. No? If you want, of course."

"Heck yes, get me out of here. I'd love a change of scenery."

So, Alvin and Sophie caught a taxi outside of the military hospital, and drove to the banks of the River Seine. There, under a willow tree, they sat on a bench, and Sophie took out the items for lunch. There were some hard boiled eggs, hard dry sausage, and fresh bread. Alvin reached into the pocket of his new uniform for his knife, and muttered under his breath.

"What?" Sophie asked.

"I forgot, most of what I had is gone. I guess somebody has nice daddy barlow in their pocket now."

"What is a daddy barlow?" Sophie asked.

"Oh, it's a kind of pocket knife that I had. I'm partial to them, and always had one back on the ranch, in Colorado. I guess when they took that bloodied uniform off me, it got taken by someone who appreciates a good knife."

"Oh, if a knife is what you want, please take mine." Sophie said as she took a folding knife out of her purse, and handed it to Alvin. It was unlike any knife Alvin has ever handled. The round wood handle held a long thin blade that was razor sharp. It had no spring, but when Alvin pulled out the blade, it came out with a long smooth steady pull. He looked it over carefully.

"What the heck?" he said. handing her back the knife.

"It's an Opinel. Almost everyone carries one, kind of like a whatever knife. No? " she told him as she laid out a small plate. Alvin watched as she took the hardboiled eggs and sliced them in half, length wise and salted and peppered them. Alvin asked her why slice the eggs, just bite into them. She looked at him for a second.

"This is France. We eat with Finesse." she told him with a smile."

Sophie handed the Opinel back to Alvin, and told him to keep it.

"But it's your knife. I can't take it. " he told her.

"Why, it's not expensive, you can buy them anywhere for very little money. Please, I want you to have it since somebody stole your uncle buddy."

"Daddy Barlow." he corrected her, trying not to laugh at her confusion of terms.

So there, under a willow tree on the banks of the Seine, Alvin and Sophie talked about their families, their hopes, and many things, and the attraction that had been growing in the weeks of Alvin's healing, became a solidified thing. It was a German bayonet that almost took Alvin's life, but it was one of Cupid's arrows that gave him something more valuable. Sophie and Alvin both became whole again after terrible injury. In the following days they talked for long periods when Alvin limped out to the garden in back of the hospital. Then one morning he awoke to the sound of church bells. They seemed to be ringing all over the city of Paris. He looked for Sophie, but couldn't find her. The Mother Superior took him by the arm.

" The bells are ringing because the fighting has stopped. There is an armistice, an end to the killing pray to God." she told him.

"But where is Sophie? he asked her.

"She thinks you will now go home, and forget about her. She said to tell you that if you want, you know where to find her."

Alvin thought, and then started out the hospital. At the curb, he hailed a cab, and told the driver to take him along the river bank, to search for a girl by a willow tree. Driving along, he spied her standing alone in the early morning mist, by the willow tree there they had spent a wondrous afternoon. Jumping out of the taxi, Alvin walked down the bank. She was standing with her back to him, and turned when she heard his approach. She looked up into his eyes searchingly.

"You will be leaving now, no?" she asked him.

"I will be leaving now, yes." he said trying not to smile at her English. He gazed across the Seine at the spires of the Notre Dame cathedral rising out of the gray mist. Church bells were ringing all over the city. " But I hoped I wouldn't be making the journey alone. I guess in a town with this many churches, we aren't gonna have much trouble finding a preacher man. "

Sophie looked up at him, and asked, "Do you mean...?"

"Yeah, I do."

Alamosa, Colorado, 1932.

The saloon was quiet as Alvin finished his story about how he came to carry a fish tail knife and brought home a pretty bride as well. Alvin looked at his mug and it was empty. The bartender took it to refill. A shadow fell across the door as someone pushed through the batwing doors. They turned, and Sophie Branson was standing there. The saloon loafers took their hats off as she made her way to her husbands side.

"All finished?" Alvin asked.

"Yes, but don't let me interrupt anything." she said.

Alvin thought for a second, and then said, "No, I finished my beer and story. I think I'm done here. See you around boys."

He stood up, settled his Stetson squarely on his head, and held his elbow out. Sophie slipped her arm through his, and together they strolled out of the Water Hole with all the aplomb of Mr. and Mrs. Astor leaving the Waldorf. The batwing doors swung shut behind them. The saloon was silent for a moment, then the bartender said, "Okay boys, line them up. This round is on me."
 
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Carl, yet another amazing story. the way you write makes the reader feel like they are right there as the story unfolds. Thank you and please keep them coming as I always look forward to the next one.


Have a great day,
Jeff
 
Carl, just fantastic my friend, I was there....sorry I should have said...you took me there, thank you!
 
Carl...Thank you!!!. I saw that the story was posted yesterday and purposely put off my reading it until today. I enjoy your stories so much that I want the house quiet when I read them. I just sat back in my chair and took a wonderful trip back in time and witnessed a wonderful love story ;)

Paul
 
loving the story Jackknife. making me want to go to the pond with my foreign lady friend and enjoy every dang second i am giving with her. also want eggs, late breakfast perhaps, mmmmm.
 
That was a real treat Carl, you old romantic ;) Thanks for another great tale :)

Jack
 
Carl, that's beautiful. Really one of your best. I enjoy how you transport the reader, not just to one time & place, but to several completely different - yet interconnected - scenes.
About halfway through, I had to pull my Opie 10 out of my back pocket, and open it up to take a good look.
Thanks, as always, for writing.
 
Love your stories every time Jackknife...
Youhave a way of telling them that put me in the sidechair of the main character...
 
that's a powerful story. thanks for sharing it with us, there's no other way Icould have the pleasure of knowing about it
 
Carl, that was a powerfully moving story. You just get better and better. Thank you.
 
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