did you get "daylight flourescents"? are you using a flourescent white balance? if you have daylight ones, just use auto but if not then use the flourescent WB. you don't want "green" blades.
Make sure that the diffusion material is kept absolutely "taut". Dips will create shadows you don't want.
It looked like you used cardboard to creat a box. what is the color of the inside fo the box? Use either white or silver on the interior.
Frankly, for the cost, I find that now companies are making good boxes to be used. The "digital photo box" is good but could be improved if they would also allow for the back side to pass light thru it. However for compactness and easy of use, I'd now recommend it compared to even building ones own.
take a look at
www.boothphoto.com
or look at this page
http://www.henrys.com/webapp/wcs/st...ay?dest=frames.jsp¤cy=USD&storeId=10001 or
http://tinyurl.com/4vqt8
the 16" model is shown but that is too small so look at the large (no photo but a price of $111 US)
for lighting, I'd recommend the Tristar light at
http://tinyurl.com/4vqt8 for about $70 US. Unfortunately there is no product info but I find it works well.
Get a light stand by Manfrotto. Actually, here is a link to a Tristar stand for about $50
http://tinyurl.com/4vqt8
this John White hunter/utility knife was done with the setup described and the use of the Nikon 995 on full auto. If you want to go to the site where I am hosting the image,
www.fototime.com >guest login>phymur@rogers.com you can look at the original full size image and maybe while not quite as sharp as what Coop gets from his Canon and smaller lens opening and better image editing work, it is more than acceptable for most folks using to show the knife.
Digital image software is Microsoft Digital Image Pro 10 which I find to be a very easy and complete software suite to use and is easily available on EBay for less that $50 and if you use the receipt from Paypal and the box has the UPC there is a $30 rebate available from Microsoft.