Survival essay for school

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here is part of my senior project for school been wanting to post this it is title why unprepared person should no go in the woods


Imagine that a man is in the woods and he’s cold, wet and scared. Night is fast approaching. The sun is going down and he is thrashing about trying to find the trail back to the safety of his car and to the warmth of his home. But just a short time ago, he decided that instead of leaving an hour early as he had originally planned, he decided to cast his hook out one more time for that all elusive fish. Of course, that all seems like a distant memory now. Then a greater disaster strikes, he takes a misstep into a hole and fractures his ankle. He can no longer put any weight on it due to the pain ratcheting up his leg. Then he suddenly takes account of his situation. He has no coat, no matches, and no food, nothing to help him out in the wilderness and even though the temperature was in the high 60’s during the day, the temperature is supposed to go below 40 at night. As he shivers and his body goes into hypothermia he wonders “Why did this happen to me?”
Sadly this is the case for hundreds of people all over the country. They expect to be out for a day and they bring along a picnic of cheese, crackers and sausage and neglect to bring ten essential items that they should have such as: a knife, extra food, water, a map, compass, matches to get a fire started, extra clothing for layering, rain gear, flashlight and a first aid kit plus telling someone the plan for the outing should he become lost (Ward and Williams 207).
When people first came to America survival skills were common knowledge. Today, Americans are lazy and used to the conveniences of life. They don’t want to carry five or six extra pounds of survival gear including the basic emergency essentials listed above. Unfortunately, this line of thinking can get people killed. Take for example, Aron Ralston, Between a Rock and a Hard Place , he set out to go free climbing (without safety gear) in Horseshoe Canyon, Utah. During his climb, a rock shift occurred which crushed his arm and pinned him in the Canyon. The weight of the rock was too great for him to lift it off himself so he laid there for three days waiting for rescue which never arrived. He then took the drastic step of performing a self amputation. That’s right! He cut his own arm off to save himself. He later wrote that had he left a note alerting folks to where he was going and when he’d be returning, he would not have had to perform a self amputation (Ralston 354).
In another example, James Kim, an editor for CNET, and his family became stuck in a blinding snowstorm in Oregon when they became disoriented on a lightly used logging road. They stayed with their vehicle for three days before James Kim decided to try and hike to a town four miles away. Authorities found the family two days after Mr. Kim set out on his journey. Mr. Kim unfortunately was found a day later dead in a creek from hypothermia. He walked 16 miles in two days, mostly in circles, and died on the second day of his journey (Katz).
These are just two of many examples, where people have made simple mistakes with devastating results. Unfortunately in the wilderness, it is the simple mistakes that will get someone killed. Mistakes such as leaving their last known location because no one has shown up or not leaving a note with friend or family member that details one’s plans can be disastrous. It seems that in a world of cars with global positioning systems (GPS), cell phones with instant access to medical and fire services, not to mention the vast array of resources found on the Internet, people have grown accustomed to a sense of security. What many people do not seem to realize is how fast technology can fail them. Cell phone batteries die faster in cold weather, cell tower signals aren’t dependable in valleys or remote areas and vehicles can get stuck in snow or fail when parts break.
Many people do not know what to do if they get into a jam? Could they make it out alive? Most people that get lost are not prepared to face the dangers that can affect them in the backcountry. A clear day can turn into a terrible storm, people get separated from their group and become lost, or as in the case of our friend at the beginning of this paper, they injure themselves by making careless mistakes. Hiking bears some similarities to a child riding a bike where the child has to keep the training wheels on in order to get to a point where he/she can begin to venture out on their own. In the case of hiking, people need to learn various steps in order to take care of themselves out in the wilderness. For example, they can begin by camping near their car which contains all of their equipment. Plus they are still near the safety of their car and maintain the ability to escape if they need to. Then once they learn the basics of camping (including what type of equipment they will need), they can go hiking and backpacking carrying the gear that they require. Once they have mastered that, then they’re ready to proceed with camping carrying minimal gear. When carrying minimal gear, a person should have acquired the ability to live in the environment that they’re staying in. Most inexperienced people that go on a hike take little to nothing with them which they need to survive whereas experienced people realize that at the very least they will need “The Ten Essentials”.
Survival begins with a great rule for the outdoors known as “The Rule of Threes”. It boils down to survival priorities: A person can live for three minutes without air, three hours without shelter, three days without water, three weeks without food (Hood). This rule gives the prepared person an idea of how to prioritize their actions during a survival situation. People need shelter first, then water and lastly food. Many people feel that they need food first above everything else. Yes, people need food but thanks to human physiology and modern society we all have a little bit of fat reserve that gives us about 3 to 4 weeks before we are truly in dire need of food. However, once those fat reserves are depleted the human body starts to eat itself.
Next to oxygen, shelter from the elements is the most important rule. The body can quickly go into hypothermia from wind, rain and cold. In wilderness situations, these are the biggest killers. For example, Christopher Appleby, a college student ventured out near Salt Lake City, Utah. He decided to go rabbit hunting in the snow and died from exposure after his car stalled; however, his friend survived because he knew the importance of seeking shelter and dug himself a shelter in the snow (Man Freezes). A shelter can be anything from a small “lean-to” to a fire to keep one warm. Because our bodies are like small furnaces, people need to keep the heat in and use preventative techniques to stop from losing more of it. We lose heat fast from laying on the cold, hard ground. For this reason, in our shelters it is wise to place a layer of leaves or small sticks on the bottom where one plans to be bedding. This will help one to stay warmer at night and keep out the elements such as rain or snow. Staying dry is another way to protect oneself from losing body heat.
The next most important rule is to stay hydrated. Bodies in modern society maintain a continuous state of dehydration as we are used to living in a temperature controlled environment. Unfortunately, the human body is always losing water through exposure to dry environments, sweat, evaporation due to wind, and through its natural state of respiration and breathing (Lundin 65). The human body loses water continuously and that is why one can’t survive more than 3 days without drinking water. Water (and electrolytes) is essential to staying alive. Another thing to keep in mind is that water straight out of a stream can be deadly. One can get sick from micro-organisms living in the water and become even more dehydrated from vomiting or diarrhea. For this reason, boiling water from streams or lakes and/or using iodine or chlorine tablets to kill anything in it that could be harmful is essential (Stroud 64).
These rules can help to keep anyone alive but only if they apply them. What should someone who is lost do if they get lost? First, there is a need to recognize that they are lost. They are lost when they start to tell themselves “my car is right around this corner” or “its right over this ridge”. The world starts to spin, they get into dazed thoughts, their vision can begin to blur, and they’re panicking. It is at this precise moment that they need to Stop, Think, Observe and Plan (S.T.O.P. ((Boy Scouts Handbook 40)). Stop whatever they’re doing and sit down, calm their self, take a drink, relax and then think about what they’re going to do next. STOP is also good because the more lost they become the more damage they’re going to do to themselves and make it more difficult for Search and Rescue Services (SARS) to find them. The reason this is so important is because leaving a note gives SARS a starting point to begin looking for them. If they get off the trail for one mile then panic for about five miles then they’re already a good six miles away from where SARS is beginning their search.
The next part of S.T.O.P. is to “Observe” to look and listen for anyone who may be calling for them or if they hear a car or truck this could signal that a road could be near to them. It is also a good course of action, to see if the area they’re in is a good spot to survive. If it’s not then they may have to move. Things to consider are: does their current location have a stream to get water? Does it have timber to build a shelter and feed their fire? Are there any animals around that could harm them? Or are there suitable small game trails to potentially catch wild animals? All these thoughts should go through their head while observing.
The next phase is to “Plan”. They should think about how SARS will find them. Do they have adequate signaling so SARS could see them from the air? How long will one be exposed to the environment before SARS rescues? How long will one last? This can all be boiled down to the Boy Scout motto of “Be Prepared” (Boy Scout handbook 54). Lord Robert Baden-Powell, the founder of the Boy Scouts which was founded in 1910, was asked “What are you preparing for?” and he replied “Be prepared for anything!” This means that when going into the wilderness, people must take along whatever they need to survive, be prepared for foul weather or storms, be prepared for injury, and be prepared by telling someone where they are going and when they plan to return (Boy Scout Handbook 54). Being prepared is the first step before going into the wilderness, so be prepared by always making a plan, having the right equipment on hand and a taking along the ten essentials.
The last thing I would like to touch on is that in order to survive they should have a basic survival kit but without a positive attitude they are as good as dead. This is the single most important factor that will keep them going when they are freezing in their small little shelter. It will be the thing that keeps them going when they’re trying to make fire in the extreme cold. This kind of attitude is the one thing that will keep an unprepared person alive. It is the voice in their head that tells them “Hey, you’re almost there! Keep going! You don’t want to miss seeing your family and kids grow up”. A bad attitude can kill one faster than dehydration. Giving up the will to live or feeling sorry for one’s self can kill. A poor attitude will prevent one from building a shelter, or building a fire at night. It will cause them to lose the will to live even when rescue was possible. One way to maintain a good attitude is to keep reminding oneself that there are reasons to live such as family or a best friend and to keep one’s hopes high no matter how bad things get. Remember the mind is stronger than most people realize and the mind controls the body (Stroud 38).
Survival skills are essential to have before making the decision to take a hike in the woods. Skills such as “The Ten Essentials”, “The Rule of Three” and S.T.O.P. can possibly avert a potential disaster. Of course, it’s also indispensable to have a positive attitude to accompany these skills. This is why I strongly believe that if one is going into the woods, then one needs to plan and be prepared.
 
That was pretty good man. I'm glad other young people know the importance of being prepared.
 
Hi Zach.

Thinking about how to organize the information. You have clearly given thought to the substance.

Examples set the scene and get reader focused on importance of your topic.

To survive:

> What do you need?
- mental aspects
- 98.6
- water
- signaling
- navigation
- food
- don't fall (about 25% of wilderness deaths)
- don't drown (about 25% of wilderness deaths)
- avoid unpleasant interaction with weather, critters, poisonous plants
- first aid (heart attacks kill about 25%)

> What could your notional victim have done before he went fishing?

> What could he have done while he was go hiking/fishing? (risk management)

> What could he have done/can he do now that he is in a survival situation?

Every book seems like it has + and -, including Stroud's.

The BSA Wilderness Survival MB pamphlet was written by a committee, some of whom were not particularly informed, and the commitee members did not communicate. Hence, always stay put vs. pages of criteria for sutiable survival campsite but zip on navigation; in hot weather wear short sleeeves, shorts, and no head covering (pictures) AND wear trousers and a brimed hat; memorizing priorities for survival absent any facts about the situation; oak as only wood for fire-by-friction; suggest striking sparks with natural flint with a stainless steel knife; no mention of antihistamines in treating anaphylatic shock; confusing the PSK with the "essentials" list; obsolete and misleading information on disinfecting wild water; and more (or less).


Here's a thought, how do wilderness survival skills and knowledge help in dealing with other emergencies in life. (Such as STOP as a tool for dealing with the announcement that your job goes away in 30 days.)

Ed: make an outline.
 
Other than a few grammatical errors, it should be fine. Though you did forget one rule in the Rules of 3: "Three months without Hope." However, if you're using Ron Hood as a source you may want to say "Three months with LOVE." (that's how he puts it)

It usually takes about a week before the body starts feeding off its fat reserves, depending on the last time you ate.

Barring certain circumstances, people are usually found within a week. Some within three days.

Pretty good paper!


ETA:

Thomas>>
It's school essay, not a dissertation on the values of preparedness. I don't know that he has to worry about all that stuff. Unless his teacher is a real a-hole. :D
 
Zach,

Good job. You may want to read this closely for grammatical errors, syntax, etc. As recently as 2 generations ago, most American males were still in harmony with nature. That is, with a little preparation and some tools, they knew how to survive the unexpected. Until the modern scouting movement, most boys spent their formative years living in nature (see the intro. to "The American Boys Handybook" for mnore information on this. Nature will provide us with food, shelter, water and warmth. The key is preparation and some amount of knowledge.
 
Good essay. Whenever I think about survival, I always think about Jack London's story "To Start a Fire", while not a true example like the rest that you have, if it's for an English class your teacher/prof might like you including some literary examples of what you're talking about too. Even if you do not want to include it, I would recommend that you at least read the story though.
 
Other than a few grammatical errors, it should be fine. Though you did forget one rule in the Rules of 3: "Three months without Hope." However, if you're using Ron Hood as a source you may want to say "Three months with LOVE." (that's how he puts it)

That would be, "without love." Although some, being so hateful, would probably expire with three months of love. 8-)

I don't know that I would mention the hope-love angle. A lot of people would give up long before the three month mark and some would thrive at just being away from the morons and mimics in life.
 
Hey Zach, I enjoyed the essay, especially your quote of Baden Powell

The founder of the Boy Scouts which was founded in 1910, was asked “What are you preparing for?” and he replied “Be prepared for anything!”
 
First, Let me say it's a really good essay. However, I would suggest that you list the 10 essentials and what their purpose is because you mentioned them so often during the paper. I think that would help you get a better grade on the paper.

David
 
That would be, "without love."

Yeah that one, too...:p

Although some, being so hateful, would probably expire with three months of love. 8-)

You been talkin' to my family?! :D

I don't know that I would mention the hope-love angle. A lot of people would give up long before the three month mark and some would thrive at just being away from the morons and mimics in life.

Some people would give up inside 24 hours. I only suggested mentioning it because he was quoting Ron Hood.
Other than that, it was a good paper.
He's knows more about preparedness than several "grown-up's" I know.
 
Most "grown-ups" are suffering such a cranial-rectal inversion they couldn't survive a trip to China-Mart if their debit card failed to read properly, let alone something really terrible happening.
 
well one thing i would like to add is my i was always taught to think no matter what the situation calls for. and i think more people need to do that
 
Hi all,

Zach, Good read, and I read your post on the night out and the terrible time you had. I posted there as well. keep your chin up and try again pretty soon it will be like a little camping trip for you, but without the hot dogs, and sleeping bags and stuff like that LOL . (Unless that is what you plan to hike with LOL) They get easyer but they are still a night out with out the normall stuff that you take when camping.

Bryan

Bryan
 
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