Thank you sir. Having reread the post, I changed or edited a word or two here and there to polish it a bit from the original you quoted.
Punctuation may be off in places. I don't know all the rules but sometimes it's about the flow and bend punctuation.
Not ready for prime time LoL ... but glad you enjoyed the little yarn. The Douk-Douk I'm happy to say, is also good to go![]()
I like unedited stuff...

You write well......some people write a blurb n 2 seconds in its Charlie Brown's teacher for me.......
Not you sir.....
